Lori made an offhanded wish for bigger breasts, and a mysterious cat-like man offhandedly had it granted. But the deal wasn’t quite so simple, and when Lori asks for her breasts smaller again, things don’t quite work out... (non-consensual refers to growth, not sex.)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 3.80
- Technical: 4.60
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall very excellent! Well written, believable characters, and descriptive BE. My only regret is that there isn't more to the story!
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked the story. That may be due to the lack of realBE stories on the site over the past couple of months, but I think that coming out of the monistor was funny, and well written. I also like the fact that the wish giver is a cat. Good story, I just would have liked some additionl charactars.
great
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This is a very nice short story. I love non-consensual breast growth!
oof
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
This moved way too fast to be enjoyable.
There was plenty of telling, not showing. The breasts grew, and the MC was surprised. How riveting.
The male character seems to suffer from short term memory failure. He won't reduce her breasts because that's something she can 'easily do herself,' but isn't that just the other side of the 'breast augmentation coin?' She could just as easily get surgery to make her breasts larger, but he granted that 'wish.'
If the woman was likeable, I would never know. I knew nothing about her before her breasts grew.
The good thing about this was the writing, but some of your paragraphs are a little too long and they do not always stay on just one topic (A sentences should convey one thought, and one paragraph should convey one overall point). Overall the writing was solid, though.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I know my past reaction to your writing was, to say the least, a bit of overkill. If its any consolation, I'm sorry for the negativity I likely caused to your stories and am now under the belief that if I don't like something to either comment to you in private or simply ignore the story all together. With that said, this was an incredibly enjoyable short read, and I do appreciate your mention that the NC was in reference only to her boobs growing without her consent. I'm gonna let you finish, but lemme just say that Dark Trianni is one of the more talented writers to grace this site, subject matter aside.:-)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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