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The Overflowing Bra

Ravens-Son
Body-Shifter's Universe: Breeders Dorm
I've waffled on uploading this here. It's inspired by the Body-Shifter's series, but the bulk of the story is focused on human women, and rather than just breast enlargement it's mostly pregnancy and weight gain. So just be advised this is very different from the other BSU stories.
Average Scores:

Flux
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good story, but I agree with Fourshot.

Hugg
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I liked the idea.

Fourshot
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

The description is accurate, the BE is mostly a side bar to the pregnancy and weight gain fetishes. Well written, but really close to being off topic.

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