aimnor@yahoo.com
This story isn't mine, I just got inspired by the original done by Lord Aimnor and decided to fix up the grammar and a bit of the story. I also added some more sexy bits at the end. :)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 2.33
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.67
Me
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
How offensive that you would modify someone else's story without their permission. Disgusting.
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Fun, but short. Could use more description and some minor technical fixing, mostly related to punctuation. Thanks for sharing!
journeys end
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
short sweet and to the point. My only critques would be to draw it out just a little bit more, it read really fast and maybe a little more detail on the BE. Overall it was a nice quicky.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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