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The Overflowing Bra

Foul Fertility
Another [sadly unfinished] chapter in the advetures of Sebron Half-Elven of the Light Magi. This time he must travel to a kingdom cursed with excessive fertility and where every woman there is hugely pregnant!
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Fun super pregnant writing, but a little more attention to grammar. Would love to read more of this!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A classic with lots of massive preggers. A real pity it was not finished.

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