Another [sadly unfinished] chapter in the advetures of Sebron Half-Elven of the Light Magi. This time he must travel to a kingdom cursed with excessive fertility and where every woman there is hugely pregnant!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
Gojira
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Fun super pregnant writing, but a little more attention to grammar. Would love to read more of this!
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A classic with lots of massive preggers. A real pity it was not finished.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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