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The Overflowing Bra

Our Wild Adventures - Part 2 (Illustrated)
"No Fear of Heights" -- My amazing adventures continue with the voluptuous Annie and her incredible expanding breasts, having great sex with and without the mysterious love melon. In this story, Annie and I discover some strange effects at high altitude, which culminate in a crazy, erotic skydiving "accident" in Hawaii!  

This is the latest story in the series that began with "The Tale of Our Isle."  If you haven't read those, jump in anyway!  We'd be grateful for any comments, it's a lot of work to create these stories.  Thanks for everyone's support!
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Wow! Can't wait for part 3! Thanks!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A ripping yarn (in more ways than one). Well up to your usual high standard of story Eggz.

I only gave the 4 on the characters because it is so unusual to have such a bad Badguy in one of your stories that I truly have taken an instant dislike to him. OOh! he makes me want to jump to Annie's defence and give him a piece of my mind and my knuckles! As I said to you in DA, I hope he gets his just deserts in the end.

Keep up the good work both of you, I haven't felt so stirred by a tale in a long time, and I've read Tolkien not just watched it ^_^

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

when will you release the next part? Waiting for it

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Always liking the continuation of this series

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