The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Vegas Strippers
On his way to Vegas to get some action a man finds himself becoming a big titted bimbo named Crystal. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I very much agree, Tracy Chu's mouth is way too big and always shows her gum!Roxanne Tong is a lot beettr, deserved to be place at least among Top3!Carat Cheung looks not bad indeed but a bit not too "decent" type.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I have to agree that just assigning cup sizes didn't really flow well. I happen to like bimbofication (see my stories for examples) and the way he kept changing was okay, slowly forgetting himself. I also didn't stumble over the writing, so there must not have been major hiccups. Not bad.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Not a bad story if you like TG and bimboization. The BE description of the growth was pretty disappointing, though. A parade of cup sizes ending finally (and in quite a jump) with "Watermelon" size. But very little actual description.

That witch/Bruha must have needed to go pretty badly. Her punishment seems awfully severe for the small trick that the guy played (although admittedly he WAS being a jerk).

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