A young man making his way in the Radio Industry discovers it's best NOT to sleep with the manager's girlfriend!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.50
- BE: 2.25
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 4.00
Daichi Lu Azure
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
The story itself seemed rushed, while the BE was POOF rather than given detail as the main character was transformed. Details could have been given on as how he was chaning rather than it being "off screen"
Randy Scot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Superb story Ms Tiger Lily! Really enjoyed this, not my typical BE but it just hooked me in - and the writing's just a step up from most of the crap on here :-)
Dubou
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I like the idea of the story, but the way it's pulled off is disappointing. The quick changes were fine with me, but the way you have a sentence of sex at the end, then quickly end it leaves much to be desired.
Geoffk
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
This is NOT a BE story. It's a transgender male to female story. The protagonist grows Double-E tits, but there's no growth sequence or details, we just happen to learn her final female chest size.
As a TG story for a place like Fictionmania it would deserve a decent rating (although by no means the best--it's short and cute rather than detailed and sexy). But as a BE story, it's totally lacking.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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