The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

David Johnson
Hope Chest
BE drug causes overinflation for the developer's girlfriend, and other side effects as well!
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Not bad.  Short and sweet.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Idk..I kind of like them. Usually they're kind of big because I like when a guy sucks on my neck rlaely hard (fetish XD) and sometimes it's like a reminder. And I don't mind people knowing cuz everyone does it. It's my mom who I don't want bugging me about it. =_= Nice comic ♥

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very entertaining! Funny and erotic; that's a winning combination.

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