Part 6 of 7, “Tumblin’ Down” -- Exhausted from the magic-enhanced encounter with David, Barbara drifts through another vision of ever-expanding house-sized hooters and rising waters, only to wake to A) a revelation regarding the culprits of her dilemma and B) her already humungous mammaries going full milk ahead. It’s a race against time and growing diameter as the desperate young couple tries to make it to the shoreline ... -- HTML, previous parts included, comments welcome!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 4.80
Uncle Deadly
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fascinating amount of detail you use. The crazy Ex seemed a bit manic towards the end there but a very enjoyable romp you've composed!
Bahamad
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The BE was great, and the pacing of the story felt like the story wasn't wasting any space, which unfortunately also made this piece feel like it was more of a bridge between more important chapters. The dialog felt believable, and the technical delivery of the piece still was well-delivered and is still among the best in the archive.
Tarquin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really good idea, story, and execution! Yes, can't wait for the final chapter, but I'm also hoping for a sequel ...
Lurker501
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Damn dude, you ride this world all the way to the bank! Its amazing and gives me all I ever wanted
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Despite how realistic you make having boobs the size of boulders to be I still find it erotic as hell. Can't wait for the last installment.
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