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The Overflowing Bra

Jurassic Park 3 Tales
A little fan fiction I finally decided to write.  I think I might be the first person to write BE about the leading ladies from the Jurassic Park movies.  Enjoy!
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

Good story, Don't really understand why it used Jurassic Park characters, they didn't add anything to the story. I would have rated it higher but it feels like you used an existing fiction just so you didn't have to do any character development, which is ok, but there was nothing in the story that involved Jurassic Park. I could go back and rewrite it with twilight, harry potter, or firefly characters with just minor changes.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Download LibreOffice. It's free, there are Windows, Mac and Linux versions and it reads the file fine.

The story itself is Ok, but it didn't really click with me. Not sure why.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Any way you can post this in Notepad or standord Word format? I cant open it.

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