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The Overflowing Bra

Coffee Pilot
Fitting in at the Ren Faire Ch4
After a long wait, the Ren-Faire saga continues! Maria, now transformed into the Queen's nursemaid, attempts to deal with the hand fate has dealt her, namely massive milky breasts and an enhanced libido. Will she give in and accept her lot as a mere servant, or will she strive to be something greater? Danger arises as she becomes embroiled in the politics of the royal household. Meanwhile, will Steven accept his transformation into beautiful Stefanie? Will the mysterious Allyn come to their aid, or leave them to their fates? And what of the ring that led to all of this? Will it find a new body to enhance? Plots thicken, breasts swell, and milk flows, in the titilating 4th chapter of Fitting in at the Ren-Faire! Ye shalt be nary dissapointed! (5th and final chapter in the works!)

Previous chapters can be found in the archive. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good story.  
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a good tale. I'm really enjoying it. I am intrigued by where we're going with it too which to me is a good indication of the quality of the writing if it draws you into the tale. Keep up the good work.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved this chapter. The time you took really shows on how polished and well done it is. Love the characters, the changes, and the plot.
I just hope things turn out well for Maria and Stephine. Also that Kalliana gets what she deserves, also the queen. My only complaint as well is that I may have to wait another 8 months to see the conclusion.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Awesome story, keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

My only complaint is that I may have to wait another 8 months to see the conclusion. Your writing is solid, and your characters are likable. I'm excited to see Stephanie's new personality a bit in the conclusion, and I'm hoping the ring can make a little more mischief before all is done. Keep up the great work!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love this story! Your characters are great; there's just something about them that comes off as very human and believable and I really liked how you kept so many different subplots moving along. Also, not everyone can write stuff in Ye Olde English and make it work. You sir, have made it work. Keep up the good work; I can't wait to see how your heroine fares in Part 5! (and if you wanted to go into a bit more depth on the growth sequences next time, that would be even better)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You are amazing. This is amazing.

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