The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Homemade Milk
Japanese girl tries experimental breast growth hormone, and soon everyone is doing it!
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

too short, too generic, too quick in the BE descriptions.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It was too short. If you had drawn it out, or made this the first part of a series, then it'd be alright.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Basis for a much more detailed continuation.

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