The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kotatsuneko
Unknown
Homemade Milk
Japanese girl tries experimental breast growth hormone, and soon everyone is doing it!
Average Scores:
 JJM75
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
too short, too generic, too quick in the BE descriptions.
 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
It was too short. If you had drawn it out, or made this the first part of a series, then it'd be alright.
 rubtex
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Basis for a much more detailed continuation.
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