Part 3: Casablanca. Mike and the girls take a trip to Casablanca to consult with the experts concerning their unexpected growth, but does Dr Bassir truly have their best interests at heart?
The download also includes parts 1 and 2.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.93
- Characters: 4.93
- Technical: 5.00
Smith
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
4 years later and still hope there is a continuation someday.
JP
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
When is the next one coming?
Yugemos
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic. Love the attention to world building and of course, the process. Can't wait to see more.
RW
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very story, Cant wait for the next installment.
BoyElroy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Terrific! Awesome chapter and glad your continuing the story. Only thing I can think of for a future chapter is to bring back some clothes/underwear stretching/ripping. Hope the next chapter is in the works and look forward to it.
Oceans
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The warm up has been excellent. It seems like the story can quite literally explode in any number of creative and fun directions. Enjoyed reading it so far, hope you enjoy writing it as much as we enjoy reading it. Cheers!
Smith
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow.. many thanks for continuing this story! I hope you find time for the next chapter soon!
.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, straight fives. Perfectely earned.
NoK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is easily my favorite story on this site.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome! Keep it up! Gogo pt. 4!
fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Story stud! No real complaints. Please keep writing!
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
gittar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best in a long time.
Psy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Finally, my favorite story on the site updated! Lives up to the previous two installments, superior style and editing, good setting (although the "this is the FUTURE" remarks started to get a hair gratuitous in this one), likeable characters, and the dream scene was pretty darned hot. My only complaint was length, but I can live with it
ktc1221
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Been waiting for this one. Great read, can't wait for more.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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