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The continuing epic PE/BE saga. After dosing Terry with enough enlargement cream to give him a sixteen inch cock, Diane decides her own figure could use a little boost, and uses up an entire bottle!
Meanwhile, tension starts to build between Jen and her roommates as the first shots are fired in a breast size arms race. Will Chris end up getting smothered by Jen, figuratively AND literally?
Originally posted on LPSG.org. Co-written with Fafhrd.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.83
- BE: 3.17
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 4.00
anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I love this series! One of my favorite stories on this site :-) can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Can't wait for after lunch! :)
necrosisbob
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Frankly I'm glad Terry didn't get Chrissy, the otaku girl back. I don't find him a likeable enough character at all and while she had faults she was generally more likeable. Frankly I've been more interested in the Chris and Jen part of the arc. Sadly that really hasn't developed much beyond where it was left off at. Other than now Chris is being written as only thinking with his penis now it seems.
I wish the whole "Steampunk" and her nemesis bit had never happened it just feels so out of place when it comes up. Like I should be reading a different story.
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
While not a poorly written story, I agree it is rather unfitting for this website. There is some BE, but it is minimal not to mention lacking description.
And just as a side note, it feels like a good 75% of this story is just about a guy sucking his own dick... Yeah, it is grahpic, more than mildly disturbing and has far too much emphasis on. To each his own, but be aware it is rather... well, gross.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Some spelling errors here and there. Annoying otaku girlfriend gone, that's a plus! Giant penis getting bigger, yikes.
ktc1221
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I ended up making an account over at LPSG specifically to keep reading this story. A good story, even if the primary focus is pg its gotten enough BE to be a worthwhile addition to this site.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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