The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ethereal Vision
The New Girl
Alex stumbles across a magic ring and becomes the girl of his dreams.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I think your stories are awesome, cannot wait to read the next one.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nearly there, would love to see longer stories, and continuations on these. Write more!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The ending was a bit abrupt, but that in itself is a compliment since I wanted to continue reading more. The pacing was pretty good, but spending a little more time on the main character transitioning from male mind to female mind could have given the story a little more depth and interesting twists. All in all, great effort. Keep it up.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

very sexy,

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Not deep, but quite enjoyable. Kept expecting the ring to mysteriously disappear, leaving Alexis stuck. Hoping for more.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

So, the characters are both "geeks". However, they aren't very Genre Savvy. They have access to a reality-shaping device that can subtly and also dramatically change their bodies and their minds. And one of the characters starts changing her mind, in anticipation of what she thinks her partner wants. What could possibly go wrong?

Otherwise, a good male fantasy story. A bit more detail in the description would be welcome, but a good story worth reading more of.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This, for me, is close to the perfect tg/be/pe story. The character's laid-back and mischievous reaction to being changed into a woman, the self-experimentation and exhibitionism and sheer joy he/she exhibits with her new powers, and the sex, are all hot as hell. I will second the comment below--a little more precise description (breast size, cock length and thickness, physical appearance) would help out. In the next installment, might I suggest Alexis experiments with becoming different women (redhead, brunette, asian, hispanic...all incredibly hot and stacked, of course), lets her new bf try out being a woman for a while, and then maybe transforms back into a (much improved) version of Alex to show her/his partner what it's like to feel a huge cock inside her...the possibilities are limitless, and very exciting.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Please continue... :-)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a fantastic story. I haven't seen a story on here that was quite as fun as this in a while. The absolute control over reality mixed with TG, is a great idea. Please continue this story!

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really enjoyed this story. I do think that the descriptions of the changes could have been a bit more clear. Things are mostly described as "bigger" with not much more to give the reader a picture. Otherwise, the characters were good, and I really enjoyed the overall plot.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Good stuff. I'd love to read the next chapter of this. My only request is that you put in more references to the sizes of things as they grow. The only bra size references are at the beginning of the story.

Reim Krig
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Overall I really liked this one. The part where her boyfriend suddenly becomes competent enough at sex to start casually calling her a slut didn't seem to fit the personality he'd had before, even if he was more confident. It could be because I'm just not keen on that particular style of sex talk though.

I'd love to read a continuation where they try out lesbianism with each other before finding a guy for a threesome...

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