The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Story of Katherine
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I'm not even sure what to say here... The motives for Katherine's actions seem rather... bland.

The story was a bit too short for my liking... and not enough sexual stuff...

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great BE story.... I really enjoyed it!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Short but very nicely done. While it does take the weird tag down another path, I thought it was creative.

Now that Kathrine has validated herself, what will she do next?

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Heh, I liked this story. Definitely one for the weird category.

The only thing I didn't like about it (that didn't affect my overall enjoyment of the story) was Katherine's complete disregard for the consequences of her actions and what she is going to do after the story ended. As a woman of science she should have put some thought into it. But hey! That's half the fun of these stories, who gives a fuck about consequences!!!

Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Do not take the "weird" tag lightly.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Just a bit too freaky for me. I like my women with legs too, but it was an interesting take for sure. Overall a good read and I look forward to more.

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