phished84@aol.com
A man is unable to satisfy his wife. But she has a solution... with some retribution.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 3.80
- Technical: 4.00
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Eddie
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
DLover
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A good solid story. Could have used another edit but the issues were minor. I hope another story shows up, possibly the sister needing to use them for more tests.
Tern
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
can't read it. what format is this?
dpo
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
You are clearly a writer, but I felt the story went from fantastic to rushed the minute sex got involved.
ed miller rules
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best story here in years. More detail about growth would make it even better.
Duuude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Couldn't see it. Please use a more conventional format
Jobber
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good story. Descriptions and characterization were not stellar but you can work on those with practice.
Why is the whole thing in italics?
El Duderino
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
DexSin
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Nice, solid TG/growth story!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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