The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Brij Fisher
phished84@aol.com
Human Services
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
I guess I shouldn't complain too much, because the tags are accurate.  The progression is slow and pretty much all the changes occur off stage.  Just seems like all the good parts are skipped over.  
 Duuude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Unbelievable!  Wonderful!  MOAR!
Only 2 parts I personally didn't care for:  The S&M and the stages of breast growth needed a cup size comparison or inches from the chest wall or both.
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