A witch discovers she is married to a demon and moves to take advantage of him, but is what is the cost of betraying a demon?
Warning: contains bursting.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.80
Leviathan
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked the idea of the story wonderfully, but I would have liked to seen the main character escape the violent ending somehow.
MrHHH
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hardly any BE. More of a violent pregnancy story.
OAO
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
This wasn't bad per se, but felt sort of incomplete. By the end it felt like a small part of a much larger, much more interesting story.
A_P
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Without a doubt one of the best stories I've encountered on the net.
foobar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the very best. Ever. Dark, moody, angry, and beautiful. Believable characters, great writing, plot progression befitting a story twice its length...
It's good to see you're back.
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