The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

TurinTheSlayer
Ghost Story 4: Spring Cleaning
83% erotica with bondage, anal, toys, domination and growing boobs.  Christy goes to do one of her odd summer jobs, but finds some things are a little harder.  There is more to come, the story was just getting too long to proofread so I split it in half.  Advice and criticism appreciated.
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Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another good installment. Thanks for the read.

Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Please keep writing stories in this universe!!

I really enjoyed the balance of sex & story in parts 3-4

Keep up the good work

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I got nothing man, your writing style is good enough and the story, despite being bdsm, is one of the most enjoyable reads on the site atm

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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