The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

This story was part of a trade by my friend Blues. Here, the prisoner of Gerudo Fortress gets his deep desire.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Ignore the troll; I think it's actually pretty good.

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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Instant is right; don't bother, there's nothing here, outside of a promising little bit about jiggling gerudo tits that goes nowhere.

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