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The Overflowing Bra

Sexual Alchemy II: Brianna and Cindy (part 1)
Our main character Sheila decides to get back at two more bitchy cheerleaders that wronged her.  She sneaks into their room and adds some fun ingredients to their drinks while they are entertaining guys from the football team.

"BJ Brianna" starts to fill into her name nicely as the changes happen.

I had to split this and the next chapter up.  They were far too big for one story...  The next chapter will pick up where this left off and will revisit Cindy and the boys.

All comments are welcome, and I especially love suggestions for future stories.  Some of the suggestions from the Sexual Alchemy I comments are going to be incorporated into Chapter 4.  Please keep them coming!

Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Enjoyable story for sure, but a bit more description would be helpful. I had trouble imagining the BE.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Technically good, with a nice idea on the expansion genre. The large pussy stuff was really nice, and I'm looking forward to the large-testicle results (not enough of this fetish out there). I enjoy the flow changes as the perspective switches characters.

I would like to see some more description of the actual growth. I've always had a hard time envisioning 'three feet around', or what a 350 lb person looks like. If you relate the sizes to things I'm aware of (like canteloupes), it's easier for me to get a mental image of what's happening. Overall, I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Really enjoying this so far. Love stories like this where the girl has a craving she can't control. Can't wait to see the next chapter. ;)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm enjoying this a lot. Particularly love the idea of slow growth happening to Sheila as she does more and more of this.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I ended up reading the first one (possibly again) so that this one would make a little more sense. It's a good read, and the changes that have happened to each girl are very entertaining. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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