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The Overflowing Bra

Shyguy
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Rise of the Cat Women: Finale
Of which things come to a conclusion, and a new beginning, for Keith and the Cat Women. (The final chapter and epilogue are pretty short, but should still be enjoyable. I also included the full version of it on .html as well as in .doc, which was what I originally wrote it in. Thanks for reading!)
Average Scores:

dagf8
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story, a little more description in B.E. would have been nice. But length WOW, quality WOW, everything else WOW. Little worried about the length but was well worth it. I can't wait to see if you write anther story :D

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of the very best! You were right, though, that your last one was rather short--I'm glad you took the time to wrap it up though. I look forward eagerly to your next idea!

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Overall a fun read with some engaging plot points and lots of sex to be had. Looking forward to any future posts of yours.

i liked the story
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

make some more i liked elfworld a bunch also.

sour
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story all round

Ned Oldfashio
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

One of the best series i've ever read! keep it up man you're a pro

etherealvision
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I love this series. I'm only sad that it's over! I look forward to your next piece of work. :)

Shyguy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

If it said a total of fifty, I apologize. I meant to say more than fifty. The thirty behind him were just the ones he counted in the one bus. There were two buses, though. lol

Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I loved it!! Please keep thinking up more great stories. I have one question : you said Keith had a total of FIFTY cat women, yet in the last part of the story he had THIRTY cat women behind him. Shouldn't it read FORTY-NINE? Did more than one lady stay behind with miss Harris? Just curious.

I cannot wait to read your next story!! Great job!!

Chaos Master

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