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The Overflowing Bra

Rise of the Cat Women: Part 7
Of which Katie's cat is catnapped by Inutech; Jamie becomes a cat woman, and researches the cat women to develop a formula to create more; and Keith struggles with his growing urges.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The increased potency should be fun. The whole world will be cat people (mostly women) soon enough.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'm curious if the full transformation for Keith will increase the amount of sexual dimorphism between himself and the non-jaguar cat ladies - like an overall enlargement rather than only an intensification of his potency. Maybe his gain in size is then only passable to the mistresses of the pride, so only they could handle all of him (but the non-mistresses would certainly enjoy trying to!) The possibility of pregnancy also brings up questions on how long the gestation period of a cat person is (house cat: 60days, lion: 110 days, human: 280 days), how big their average litter size is (house cat: 4, lion: 4, human: 1.03), and whether only the mistresses are fertile. There are many avenues to explore, and I'm happily awaiting to see what comes next.

Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I could not help but notice the serum Jamie is making seems designed for Keith's DNA ONLY, and not general consumption.
These excerpts support my theory :
( specifically, one that would transform Keith into a full cat man )
( figure out Keith’s current DNA composition. Once she did that, she could tailor a transformation formula, specifically meant for him.)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loving this series at the moment.

My answer: Yes, if it makes his dick bigger ;)

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