The Overflowing Bra

Busted my nut.

Only muscle bound scum or unhealthy masochistic tomboys/nerds could enjoy such a story.

NEED MORE

This is my favorite story on here. You really must continue it.

Brillant overall, the ending was abrupt however.
Would really like to see a continuation that goes past the tanning and etc, plus has some contact with Terry.

The breasts grew too much, too quickly, and while asleep. I would have liked more playing around instead of getting right to the sex near the end.
By the way, Terry Grossman, M.D. is physician that offers radical hormone therapies for extreme anti-aging. Look him up...

This is fantastic! You have to continue it, though. God damn, I loved this. Definitely add another chapter that deals with Karen's mental transition/humiliation and maybe some rejection of Terry.

A nice piece of writing.  Unlike many others on this site, your story kept me reading to the end.  Thanks!

thumbs up

Having her have (great)sex unconsentual. Fine i guess...
Having her turn into a mindless fucktoy. Fine i guess...
But having the be two assholes. Man, couldn´t it have been with Terry instead? As it is now i just feel bad for her...And for them to mabye have their own transformations? in favor of Terry perhaps?
Oh, and there seems like there is a lot of text that could have been shortend, at least at the non BE parts.
And last i guess i just don´t like how you made the two guys negatively accosiated to the reader and then have them come up on top. good written otherwise tough.

Honestly, meh... good attempt at a story, it seemed rushed... the concept was good, I hope you flesh it out, but I don't know... it just really seemed to miss something.

bonertastic.

Seems non-consensual and unhappy endings are too much for some of the people here. Oh well.
I honestly really liked this story, the detail could do with some improvement, but the style was very well done. I agree about the letter, it felt like it was just some hokey way to just end it, but it didn't derail me much; it'd be like questioning the plot of a porn movie. Keep it up.

Different people have different opinions. In my personal opinion, this is a great story. My only complaint is the note at the end - it doesn't really fit with the serious tenor of the rest of the story.
As you may see from just about every story tagged with "nc" in the last few months, "ktc" isn't a big fan. Again, different people, different tastes.
Keep on writing - you're very talented - and don't let 'em grind you down.

although my ratings match that of the previous comment, i chose them for a different reason.
although i'm not a fan of what happened to the main girl, i believe its the author's creative choice.  
However, I do feel that the descriptions of the physical changes were somewhat skimpy.  Perhaps that is the consequence of using the "asleep" tag, where the transformation occurs instantaneously to the reader.  Put a little more time into the bodily descriptions and you'll have a great story.

I've got an un-canny like for punk girls, and I genuinely liked yours. What I didn't like was what happened to her. Your writing technique and ability to create a likeable character are fantastic, but the way this particular story went I'm hoping isn't how all of yours go.