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The Overflowing Bra

The Preve
Lamprey Lust: Special BE Edition
How the hell'd they get this big?!
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

But what´s the deal with the text?
It seems realy manhandled, with spaces between each letter.
Am i using the worn program to open this?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Oh, how I wished I was around when that happened. Of course, I have to find a way to get to Peachtree in the next 6 days!

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As usual, your descriptions of the physical changes to the characters are very well written.

Can't wait to see what happens to the couple next

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Totally bizarre but fantastic regardless.

Im not typically into the "weird" stories, but this has opened my mind a bit. I look forward to seeing more.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

It's a good short read. I was expecting a bit more bizarre considering it was from the Preve and that's what I got. Not for the faint hearted I suppose but it wasn't gory or anything just...odd.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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