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Of which more cat women are created; Keith has a date with Katie and gets bugged; and Sandra and Eve play a sneaky trick on their landlady. (Sorry if I tend to mix up names from time to time. I am rather bad at that, but try my best not to. lol Also included parts 2 and 3)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.60
funfun74
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really enjoying your story. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
It started out less of a sex rump than it is now, but I still very much enjoy the series. Looking forward to your next installment.
IamwhoIam
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is quite possible one of the best BE series ever. You sir are now sitting up there with the other great BE writers: derob jacobs and marknew, come first to mind. You definitely have a knack for stories.
ryan111
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Simply amazing work! I love how thus far in the series you've managed to reveal at least one new aspect of their abilities in each part. In this I believe I counted 3 revealed abilities, and this is 4 parts in! You've taken a bland theme that other authors have beaten to death and managed to make it fresh and interesting again, bravo good sir!
Chief
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I have to say that I am thoroughly enjoying this story, even beyond the obvious reasons. The characters are well rounded even considering their servile nature. They have still their individual personalities and thoughts and are not simply carbon copies of one-another.
The depictions of the transformations are, to be fair, slightly lacking but I would contend that this is only a minor issue as the BE and PE are described in their most direct means.
The writing is done well, the only issue being that which you've already acknowledged. It's a minor problem and any adept reader should be able to overlook them.
I eagerly look forward to the next installment!
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