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The Overflowing Bra

The Thief and the Sapphire
A thief climbs into the queen's palace to do a bit of the old plunder-and-loot, but finds herself becoming a bit more enamored with the royal wardrobe than she was expecting.  Medieval fantasy bimbo/BE.  Because why not?
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A very enjoyable story. Just the right length too. The BE description was minimal, but it leaves more to the imagination, which I liked.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent story. I have to agree with the other comments that it could use some more BE, but it doesn't need an overhaul to get this effect. A final overall description of her body at the end of the transformation could do the trick.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Short, yet very descriptive, and overall a nice quick read.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Hit all mt fav topics to read and while the BE seemed minimal I like the amount for this length of story. Thanks for writing.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I enjoyed the story, but thought the be was lacking.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good, although more of a transformation story than a BE one.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I liked it quite a bit but then you hit upon a few of my favorite things: slow, gradual changes, plenty of clothing description, fantasy settings, and bimbo stories.

Basically, by themes, it checks all my favorite boxes - only makes me wish it was a bit longer and even more in depth!

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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