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The Overflowing Bra

Rise of the Cat Women: Part 2
Sandra and Keith learn new abilities, two more Catwomen are born, and Keith contemplates whether to comply with the morals and values he was raised on, or to give in to his sexual desires. (Added part 1 too. Enjoy!)
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

well written i enjoyed the first three parts(you'll see this on all three reviews) really like the progression and conflict he had to open up as well as the pride explanation, made it feel more natural. You need to continue this!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Ok, so we know that her milk and pussy juice are chemically powerful, and by intense foreshadowing that the Catgirls come to dominate the world. I just wonder... what happens if you're allergic to cats? Because I WANT ONE

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Overall an excellent piece. I can't wait to see more!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It's stories like these that make me wish there was a 'harem' tag on this website. The mystery of the PE from Chapter 1 still remains unsolved and I'm curious if it's his harem size that affects it. Growing to meet the desires and demands of his lovers, so to speak. You have me waiting for more.

Cat of Many Faces
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

All the main characters seem likable. The cats are entertaining, and it's got an interesting overarching plot. Fun all around.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

great addition, looking forward to more chapters

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Pretty serious improvements made as far as "cliche" or generic goes as well. Her ability to change other cats into more cat girls was pretty neat. Looking forward to your next post.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

great improvement over the first chapter! Much better pacing, almost no spelling errors, save for a few that probably slipped by due to them being spelled right but being the wrong word (you spelled bowl bowel in several parts) interesting how the "mistress" has the ability to grow catgirls too! can't wait for part 3!

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