The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Isley Files
Pamela Isley is tending to her (rather odd-looking) new plants... what will happen if they react oddly to her favour?
Average Scores:

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

good, but WAY TOO SHORT

Daichi Lu Azure
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

The story is a bit on the SHORT side. Could have gone into a bit of describing Posion Ivy a bit more as in why she was good with plants and all. As well as going into a bit more drawn out BE process.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

short and to the point. more in the same universe or just in general would be neat.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

Decent story and characters, just WAY too short. I liked where it was going, but it left me unsatisfied, and wanting more.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

"En media res" is appropriate for some stories, this being one of them. Straight to the point and enjoyable to me. I hope we get to read what happens next!

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