thegreygreyman@gmail.com
Katy loves her boss. But, the only things he loves are breasts. She tries to earn his attention other ways, but -ultimately- there is only one path to his approval. This is the most twisted, the most realistic, and the last tail I have written.
Someone paid me money to write this -hopefully- they feel it was worth it. It has been tailored to the tastes of this site, so I hope you will enjoy it as well.
Sincerely,
Mr. GreyMan
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.09
- BE: 4.09
- Characters: 4.27
- Technical: 4.18
Outro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Incredible story!!!! Absolutely LOVED IT!!
fri
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
good story! would be awesome to get a sequel.
tarquin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
excellent, love to see another chapter of her expansion (physically and her life)
Dr Flem
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Enjoyed the story, and I love implant stories, I would have liked more filling scenes and a slower overall growth. I am starting to get tired of all implant stories ending so darkly, but that's not your fault. Hope you write more!
deus
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not really my cup of tea. I like BE-via-implant stories, but as others mentioned, this one got a bit dark. There also wasn't much in the way of sex scenes, and it takes quite awhile before there is any BE. There were a few minor spelling issues, mostly on homophones (rein vs. reign, for example). Also, in cup sizes GG is the same as H. I can see you put a lot of work into it though, so thanks for writing.
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent story. I love implant inflation stories and this is very well written. The plot development and characters are interesting. My only (small) complaint is that it was at frist rather difficult to work out when she was dreaming or thinking. It might have been better if these paragraphs were in a different font or italics to differentiate them from the actual narrative.
IamWhoIam
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good story technically but Im no fan of implant stories. I actually like your mary-sue stories. This wasn't enjoyable from a sexual point but was interesting from a psych point.
IMPLANTS_FAN
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, Love Implants Stories. Thanks.
ktc
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An incredible story. Bit dark for my tastes BUT it did not cross the line. I am also less of a fan of implants in general however that doesn't mean I won't read and enjoy them anyways. My grading on overall enjoyment and BE description are specifically because this is not my cup of tea kind of BE. It was really a enjoyable read, and I would definitely not down play anybody else reading it.
Morken
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
el burro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, you really have a knack for writing in extremes don't you. Nice work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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