A sadistic spirit has its way with a college girl living in a haunted house. 96 percent erotica with toys, anal, bondage, domination, and growing boobs. Please rate and comment if you want me to write more.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.83
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.67
Icarus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it. For me, just the right side of extreme!
blockhead
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it. I love the opening. How it starts off in the middle of the story and then recaps events. The end was a little weak for me. I think you got wrapped up in the events and lost pacing a bit. All in all though, good stuff.
Lucky
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow. You're a damn good writer. More, please!
mandy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
wow.... i love playing the submissive role... this was.... just wow.... in a good wow way.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked how this went and I hope you do write more.
HerbalVerbal
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
That was a fantastic story, though I am a little shocked by it. Pretty raunchy, but great for this site. Keep up the good work!
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