The Overflowing Bra

Don't let these ratings discourage you. It's intelligent. Just make it into a breast expansion story.

The "spice" idea is great.  A illustrated comic is a nice change.
This story, however, sucked.  The pictures sucked.  There was no visible growth, other than perhaps the musclar girfriend.
Oh, and if he wanted to be giant and muscular like his girlfriend was getting off his jizz, he'd do the gay thing with his buddy who is also doing spice. Put the jizz in a drink or something and choke it down.

Okay, first of all, it's obvious you're in love with Poser, or whatever junk you used to make the models. Second, you're in love with dressing them up. Third, you didn't buy enough Poser props to make them varied costumes or give them a set besides one apartment. Fourth, there's only one scene where we actually see one girl's breasts. Fifth, you don't know how to write dialog. I think I'll stop there. Back to the garage, and go read some of the higher-ranked stories here to pick up some dialog hints. Oh, and get your mom to give you money to buy some more varied costumes, props and body models for Poser if you're going to do this. "Your ad here," indeed!

The fact that you charge money for this means that it should be held to a higher standard than most stories on here.  Given that I enjoyed it less than most of the stories I find for free, I was very disappointed.
The problem with this story is that not much happens.  I'm quite fond of the concept, that the spice does different things for different people, but cmon, the story doesn't go anywhere.  No sex, very little nudity, not much in the character department.  
It really feels like a teaser, as though the "good stuff" is just behind the pay wall.  I didn't find any of that "good stuff" here, and I have no reason to believe that what's behind the pay wall will be any different.

Normally a BE site expects there to be BE in a story.
Wait, hear that sound...it's this story and the god awful illustrations sucking!

not impressed i thought was an actual full story,based on your cartoon.

BEST STORY EVAR!!!!!!!!1!12@

m-m-m-m-monster fail

Probably one of the most underwhelming stories I've read in a long time.

WTH? Even with "illustrations" it's still utter trash. Don't bother downloading.

even more shallow and hollow that most of the recent stuff on here.

Worst ever. Plain and simple.

Oh hey what's up Comic Sans. Don't use that crap in something you're trying to sell. And while you're at it, stop making things, you're awful at it.

Stand on it's own? 
Sounds like the type of standing where you're at a party, trying one's best to make inspecting the potted plant in the corner interesting enough for people to come over and talk to you.

I must say it's rather poor. The writing needs a lot of work. I could barely follow what was going on.
What makes it even worse is that you go through all this trouble of making a comic but don't bother showing what you are trying to describe. I guess the girl is supposed to have BE and weight gain, but then why does she look the same at the end as at the beginning?

That was...so awful. You make money off of those? You shouldn't be allowed to make money off of those. Ugh.