TheClause2007@yahoo.com
After checking the comments section on my first upload I noticed some complaints about the format. So I went ahead and made it a Rich Text File, which I understand is the most commonly readable. This is my first upload, so live and learn, but any future uploads I will try to do in a more common format. You can read the story description in the previous upload.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 5.00
Namazuros
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic story; you took a great idea and wrote it wonderfully. I absolutely love the transformation involved, it's done so well...I just wish there was more, lol. Best story I've seen here in a long time!
anyony123
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great start for a new series liked everything about it except for how little of it there is ^^.
pr0nm8
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice start! I look forward to more.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
very good story! Keep it up!
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