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The Overflowing Bra

Bra: A Saw Parody (Part 1- DeDe) rtf version
After checking the comments section on my first upload I noticed some complaints about the format.  So I went ahead and made it a Rich Text File, which I understand is the most commonly readable.  This is my first upload, so live and learn, but any future uploads I will try to do in a more common format.  You can read the story description in the previous upload.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fantastic story; you took a great idea and wrote it wonderfully. I absolutely love the transformation involved, it's done so well...I just wish there was more, lol. Best story I've seen here in a long time!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great start for a new series liked everything about it except for how little of it there is ^^.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very nice start! I look forward to more.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

very good story! Keep it up!

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