TheClause2007@yahoo.com
This is part 1 (Chapter 1, if you will) in a series. Essentially a Saw parody, it follows the travails of a young woman Jenna who finds herself kidnapped and facing challenges to free her friends. The disclaimer at the beginning mentions all of the elements that will eventually be included in the novella, but this first installment will include BE and Bimboization predominately.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.50
anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I gotta say, I'm really likeing where this is going. I really enjoyed what you had so far.
wps?
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
can't read it . can we get a txt, doc, pdf, or word version?
bah
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Wps file??! I have no way to easily read that on my desktop (linux) or my pda!
xarinth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A good beginning, can't wait to see how it goes from here.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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