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The Overflowing Bra

Reim krig
State of Emergency - Beth
A story set in Dexter Sinister's State of Emergency world.

Bobbie has never had the chance to be with the person she loves. But now that the whole world is being altered by a strange sexual virus she takes her chance to make some adjustments to herself...
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

A little weird, and not much BE, but thanks for writing.

Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Bravo, man! That was great! :D

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I've always liked the State of Emergency series and I think you did a great job expanding on that premise. Only thing to improve would be a bigger focus on the transformations and the characters spending more time enjoying their changes. Would love to read more!

Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I think you did a great job. Please at least consider writing more State Of Emergency stories? Perhaps you should try a more sexual but still loving story next time/

Keep up the great work!

Chaos Master

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Weirdest turn on I've had in months....

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