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The Overflowing Bra

Our Grief Consoled, Part 2
The second half of the second postscript to the series beginning with "The Tale of Our Isle," and a sequel to "Family Reunion." This part details the rest of that first day when Annie knocked on the door.  Thanks to the fans who enjoyed the series and characters, and especially those who took the time to comment.  (Part 2 has less talking and more of what everyone likes in a BE story!)
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

two thumbs up.dont stop now!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Two words for a new experience for Annie: 'Kama Sutra'.

I would love to see them travel (and go at it) all over the world, find other people like them so they aren't the only ageless immortals in the world, and find new facets of the powers the melon gives (I definitely see some level of shape shifting-not just the BE, PE they have been doing.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Kudos Eggs

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

My gods! This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read!

Please .. (oh please) keep writing!

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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