The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Fantome
fantomeinfernal@yahoo.com
The choice she made
Maybe a life without fun would have been better instead of the choice she made? Then again, maybe not...
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 Sil
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A nice story, with a touch of humor in the situation.
 ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I liked it. A bit more mild than the other stories that have been posted but fun all the same. I gave you a lower BE description because you only used letters to describe them and the actual changes happened off camera, but I enjoyed the whole story all the same.
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