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Maria's breasts keep swelling and her body gets even sexier as she gets more and more drawn into the Renaissance Festival. Things start to get crazy though as an outing to a strip club really sets off her growth. The trouble is: she's enjoying it! Steve becomes suspicious of Maria's growth and sexual appetites and decides to investigate. The powers that be decide things are getting out of hand and must be dealt with as Maria's growth threatens to reveal the hidden truth behind the Ren-Faire! Those of you who wanted more growth in the first 2 chapters look no further! Apologies that this took so long to get done, hope its worth the wait. If you haven't read chapters 1-2 first I suggest doing so before reading this one. As always feedback is requested and heartily appreciated.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.89
- BE: 4.89
- Characters: 4.78
- Technical: 5.00
sovietspyder
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Oh how I could experiance such!
funfun74
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story. I hope we get to see the next chapter. I also can't wait to see how Maria reacts to a new girlfriend.
Kodos
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This is an excellent story. Not only did you make the characters engagingly human, but your growth descriptions are absolutely the best I've read in a while. Keep up the great work; I look forward to seeing what you'll come up with next!
MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this, as I have the other two. Please keep up the good work. I was dismayed by the ending slightly, but I am curious to find out how Maria will react to having a new girlfriend, and if they will become permanent residents of the ren-faire.
I wish they had things like this renaisance fair in the UK, magic and boobs aside, it sounds like so much fun.
befan#1
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
After some really horrible stories lately, yours has shined out :)
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well done again. There were only a few small typos where the text has one word when you obviously meant something else. Also, DD = E and DDD = F, so the cup size increase in the middle of the story is off by 1. Otherwise, great work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
MrMB
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is really and truly fantastic, exactly the sort of story I check here hoping to stumble across. I know I, for one, am eager awaiting any and all future works!
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Happy to see a continuation. The others definitely were good, but this one was spot on! Can't wait for the next installment.
some guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Huzzah! A most excellent and long-awaited continuation!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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