The Overflowing Bra

Hey 4GB, ever watch a movie and by the end you think you know exactly what's going on, and then the end just totally takes what you said and turns it inside out? Happens a lot.
For what this was, it was... eh, it was okay. I think description needs work here and there, the characters are decent. Quality's good though. Kinda wanna see how it turns out.

I probably would have liked it more if i actually was into rape, but im a bit more normal then that. This one seems very dark and i see no happy ending or character development due to rape filling in the blanks. Continue the other story you uploaded recently instead imo.

What KTC said.  I dropped my BEStory Club membership because I was sick of paying to get access to Kris P. Kreme's Traveling Rape, Incest & Lobotomy Show.  But look, I can get it here for free.
The site needs to add a rape code.  'Non-consensual' in the local context just means the character undergoing BE didn't agree to it or seek it out.  Not exactly helpful when filtering stories to avoid reading about violation.
And given events in South Africa and beyond, 'convert' is just about the worst possible choice of word.

Then it was definitely best you didn't read on, the story does have focus on rape. While you're right about one character remaining relatively unhappy, the others he 'converts' become accepting. Sorry you didn't enjoy it too much though, ktc, and thanks for giving your insight on it.

I don't want to say its an awful story, because its main themes are done very well. What I do want to say is I'm a little tired of all the new stories that have little to do with BE. It didn't surprise me much that The Dark Triannis story was much more focused on Transformation than BE or the likes, but large reason of why I've enjoyed BE over the many years I've read it is how it tends to differentiate itself from a lot of fetishes by not making the female completely weak, completely submissive, and completely unwilling to want the expansion to happen to her. A lot of recent stories are of rape, pedophilia, and plain unhappy female characters (at the start anyways, tend to end up as mindless bimbos at some point) and frankly I'm just tired of it. So while your writing quality is top notch, stories of rape and absolute dominance being the focus are just unsettling to me and I'm sure many other readers. Maybe I'm wrong, and everybody here loves that stuff. I'll be honest as well, I couldn't read the story beyond the first chapter because of how abruptly it went to rape. To those who have enjoyed Trianni's writing in the past you'll probably enjoy this one as well.