The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nice vacuoles!
A pretty standard, "flat girl undergoes strange and unusual transformation into busty goddess" story with a botanical flare to it.
Average Scores:

I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Extremely enjoyable story. I would love to see more work by you in this same vein!

Some explanation of my ratings:
BE description was a bit terse, considering the amount of description some stories here have. However, I felt that it fit the story nicely without becoming some kind of gravity well of description.
The characters: your female lead deserves nearly 5 for characterization here, but your male lead is a bit low-dimensional. Good work on the former, not as impressive on the latter.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It was a very original concept and had many new ideas that I've never previously encountered. That's what counts the most imo - originality. I also liked the "open" ending which provides material for other authors and the overall "happy" feeling throughout the story.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I really like this type of story Clean and inviting to the BE character. The plot was first rate. Like other said too quick of an ending.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

The story was quite good, and as others said, finally a good work on the site!
Maybe next time try to leave more time (and text) after the full transformation. In this ways it's too short: getting green, growing, growing lasrger, whoa, then everybody leaves in peace and happiness. Its good, better, then better, then suddenly ends.
Otherwise, liked it.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

What a nice break from the recent crap-fest.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Certainly one of the better new stories we've gotten around here lately. I've always thought this sort of thing would make a good story. Sort of reminded me about a book I read as a kid called Top-Secret.

Anyways I think it could have used a bit more BE and have it be more detailed. I'd also like the echo what other have said about breaking up the text a bit.

Overall I liked how this had some actual story to it and I'm really hoping you write some more stuff. Too many new authors write one good story and disappear.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I think I might have a plant girl fetish now.... Walls of text aside it was a good read.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

I really wanted to get into the story, but I had a hard time getting past the gigantic walls of text. Break up your paragraphs, a lot. Don't forget that you need a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. I liked what I could muddle out, but you need to let all of your ideas have their own space; right now, it's just too crowded.

Also, I couldn't make much out, but I don't think that there was a lot of description of the sex, just a lot of fading to black. Describe the sex!

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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