The Overflowing Bra

not really sure why this story got such low ratings.. i wish there were more like it. it's too bad this was from three years ago.

For a starter it's not bad.  It has a stilted flow, doesn't build up well, and the descriptions are very forced.  The basic structure however shows good merit.  Continue working on it and you could have a real winner here.

I cany open it. You may want to paste it to notepad and repost it here.

Unfortunately, not too many people use OpenOffice, and odt files can be very difficult to open for most users.  You should save the story as txt, rtf, pdf or doc (MS Office 2000/2003).  To do that in OpenOffice, do the following:
        1        Start OpenOffice.org Writer.
        2        Click "File," and then "Open." Alternately, press "CTRL" and "O." A box will pop up that shows the files and folders on your computer.
        3        Navigate to the folder where your ODT file is located. Left-click the file.
        4        Click "Open" to load your file.
        5        Click "File" and select "Save As" on the drop-down menu. Alternately, type "CTRL," "SHIFT" and "S" at the same time. A "Save As" dialog box will open.
        6        Click the arrow in the drop-down box beside "Save As Type."
        7        Select "Microsoft Word 97/2000/XP (.doc)" and click "Save." A box will pop up to warn you that the document may contain content or formatting that won't work in Word format. It will ask if you want to save as a .doc file anyway. Choose "Keep Current Format."
I can't comment on the story, as I can't easily open it myself...