Yuffie wants to become the main conquest of the party. Does this materia hold the key...?
Apologies for double upload.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.43
- BE: 1.86
- Characters: 1.14
- Technical: 2.57
Anon
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Not quite a story, more like it. Come on.
Daiyuki
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
It's like 200 words. Decently written, I suppose, but it's still like 200 words.
el burro
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Seriously, is the OFB being trolled this season?
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
For a short scene it wasn't bad. Still felt a little lacking though.
Anon
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Sorry I scrolled down slightly and missed the story.
Ninja In The Night
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This is offically one of the worst "stories" I have ever read. It is barely a paragraph of text unsuccessful in describing breast expansion from a video game character. It lacks body, substance, length, and grammar. You need to work on the whole shebang. Better luck next shot.
amanDDa
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
welllll its more of a scene than a story and it shows promise?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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