Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
Annon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
You need to work on the quality, the length and draw out the story to where it's a few pages in length rather than wham, bam it's done.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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