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Not my story, but I liked it and cleaned up the grammar from the climax.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.60
- BE: 1.60
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.60
AdjectiveNoun###
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Daiyuki
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
What is this I don't even
kyu
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
..how can you "clean up" a story and somehow make it WORSE than the original? For reference, the original is still uploaded here. I'm not even sure if it needed "cleaning up" >_<
deus
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This just doesn't make any sense to me. It starts off with "3 hours later". Is there a piece missing? Even if so, the way it proceeds after that doesn't make any sense either.
A Nonny Mouse
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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