( Milk is fin, Milk is fin come close and singelein... a not English textelein )
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
kitty
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I do not approve of this story. v_v
Soylent
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
The story posted might as well be considered spam.
HELP! Where are the moderators!?!?!
Gfoogy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Thanks for posting a non-English story to an English-based website.
blackwolf
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Technically very poor, almost unreadable. Full of grammar/spelling mistakes. Some lines even seem like a random sequence of words.
Is german really your first language? Looks like its gone through a buggy auto translator or something. Might be better to stop uploading stuff like this and use forums for proofreading and translation first.
Cheers.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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