boobies to the max with tities to boot
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.29
- BE: 4.14
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.14
JJM
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the water melon juice lactation... that was hawt!
Dan Standing
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Woah, totally my story and totally not submitted by the REAL Dan Standing...who is me. It's freely available at my own website (as STICK TO IT) so I guess it doesn't matter if it is posted here, but sort of not cool to have someone do it without asking...
Thanks for realizing this wasn't posted by me!
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Yeah, this definitely was not posted by Dan Standing -- he would have given it a correctly capitalized title and a better-written description. (Compare the description on the other story of his that's available here, "Real Woman," which he did post himself.)
a
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Erazor
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
like ktc said the story was published at:
danstanding.com/wordpress/?p=267
Ren
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I had thebiggest orgy ever when I read this
ktc
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I didn't want to down rate the story as its rather good, but this is by Dan Standing and its called Post it Note (or something similar) on his own website. If you really are Dan Standing I fail to see why you'd decide to rename your own story. Despite me feeling you've stolen it from him, the story is great. A simple Title would do it good though at the top, as well as some proper indentations on the paragraphs.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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