Contains all parts of "Sanctuary in the Sand" up through Chapter 5, by far the longest chapter yet, in which Vivi, Robin, and the Straw Hat pirates engage in battle with Crocodile and his forces. Contains between 1 and 3 commissioned illustrations for each chapter, so the file is kinda big. I'll upload a lighter version if there is call for it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
Polar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought it was really good. This story has been an interesting take on One Piece. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the conclusion of the story.
Jahez
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Could be better, but maybe I'm just biased against fan fic.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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