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And what if you were able to invent an "immortality" serum?
NOTE: This is a second upload. Word 2010 document, but file saved in the 97-2003 format. Used 7-zip application to zip it in regular .zip format. Hope everyone can download the story now.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.23
- BE: 3.92
- Characters: 4.08
- Technical: 3.77
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Rizky
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Hey David Regarding your question about the Toronto Comicon in Aug/Sept... it's deftniiely a show you'd want to go to. It's quite big. But the only thing is that you have so far to travel and the convention is only 2 1/2 days long.Good thing is that you have your buddy Bobby over here so you could send your books to my address if you wanted so you wont have to deal with handling fees and storage.It'd be great to have you. My Imaginism booth did really really well here but that probably has to do with the fact that I live here so I have the hometown advantage :)Bobbybtw, are you going to be at the Wondercon or Wizard LA? We're attending those for the first time this year.
sqwurty
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
great anticipation for part 2
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great work!
(You clearly know what a telomere is even if you didn't call it that. I'd guess you made a choice not to include technical language; I might have done the same thing.)
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
OK, that was fucking hot.
I believe the technical term for "stings" would be "telomeres" which are parts of the gene that gradually shorten, eventually resulting in the inability to replicate. Copies of the cells have the shorter telomeres and gradually grind to a halt.
I would also think, in addition to just generalized growth, by having larger testicles, he'd have much higher testosterone levels, so he'd not only be horny, but get much more muscular.
This would occur with her, as well, but not as extreme.
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great start! I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
LDQ
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Awesome stuff! Please continue! Ignore the microbiology troll. : )
Jobber
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I'll repeat what I said about from the previous upload. Good plot, good story, but your grammar needs work.
PeterBE
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Archive opens well in Win 7. Thanks.
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
awesome in every way except the sudden ending eagerly anticipating a followup
anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
String? and then DNA, look, buddy, if you're going to write scifi smut, might as well know the science. better luck next time.
cdcd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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