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The Overflowing Bra

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Family Reunion (Illustrated)
A postscript to the series beginning with "The Tale of Our Isle."  Who were those mysterious party crashers that dropped in at the Gillingham family reunion in 1975?  They couldn't really be who they said they were, could they?  This one is especially for the fans that enjoyed the first four installments in this series.  Thanks to everyone for your nice words and support of this series.
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Woody
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

The pictures are great, the story is ok.

Chelsie
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I agree whole-heartedly. (Is that supposed to be hpheynated?) Anyway, taking Tom's approach helps turn a lot of the takes that seem like they're ruined into jewels.Did someone walk into your shot and scream hi mom! ? Don't knock it, it could be just what you needed to punctuate that shot sequence.Now, if only I can figure out how to properly use hyphens

macdannyk1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Oh to be immortal with super-powers! Quite good.

Anonymoose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great continuation of the series. its a shame on how much their decedents turned in to jerks though.

Hopefully there will be at least one more story with the now ageless Rob and Diana meeting up with their great+grandparents to at least compare notes and (maybe) share different breeds of the mellon?

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm pretty bias as I have read most of the stories to this point. This was very well done, and I do hope you continue to write for the site. Couldn't bring yourself to give Diana bigger than a D-cup at the end I did notice which was a shame, but that's my only "complaint" :-).

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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